Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 26, 2021
How The Europeans Got to New Zealand
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amazing job Sophie! the only thing i could recommend is to write about what problems occurred when they got onto land and met the Mãori. i really like how you put in the name of the ship that they took, and all of the little details. great work! - Daisy
ReplyDeleteThanks Daisy, I definetley appreciate your advice
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