In writing, Mrs. Atkinson made a slide with a bunch of different pictures on it, every day we go onto the slide and pick one to do ( I normally do them in order. ) We have do describe the picture using 3 sentences, I Hear, Taste, See and sometimes for an extra I add I feel. All the pictures are after the stories so you can see the picture I was going off. I work hard on these so I hope you like them. Please leave some feedback.
Monday, April 20, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Wow Sophie, this is fantastic writing! I am loving reading all your starters and especially how well set out it is on your slide. I am most impressed with your allocation of roles within your story, fantastic that you are Amelia Earhart, love it!!! I can definitely tell how hard you have worked on these. I am wondering if you might want to recheck your font, as it could be quite challenging for some people to read! Keep up the fantastic writing :)
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