Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 25, 2019
You can make a difference!
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hi i'm Olivia from marshland school, I really liked your pictures, the pictures were sad. You have persuaded me that i should make a difference and help others make a difference. next time you could make your writing a bit bigger so i don't have to zoom in. but all together your really smart. please check out my blog by clicking on my name. also look at Sophie's other blog posts.
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